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This is a rather long story I did using the SF original characters. I just recently finished the last part, though there may be an epilogue.
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I love the last few sentences of the first paragraph. Now that's good writing. :3 Not that I don't love the whole story too. In fact there are really only two issues with it. First off, it's always the same. Maybe a different location, and the positions are fairly varied, but it's always the girl gluing one another to something. Second is the characters. I understand it sounds good to have five girls all glued up in a story, but to me it's becoming difficult to keep track of them all. Kinda like those Shakespearean comedies with way too many people to count.
Great story, though, and there's still seven more parts! :)